Tag: Writing

Writing Task about Empathy

 

 

 

task description this week in literacy we learned about empathy  and we had to write a story showing empathy and here is my writing  I really had fun doing this task this week and also we had group talks about showing empathy towards each other  and here is some things  we were talking about . How we could give them a hug  buy them a gift or  take them to a  library  and read some books while relaxing . Leave a positive comment on my blog thank you .

Begin writing here: A girl  was angry because she got a 55 on the  test.  Are okay you got a 55  im sure you can do  better next time  i got a 44 you did evan better than me .so i want to get you a gift  are you free after school we can because we can go for a walk after school bell rings you walk  home right    come just a short one walk by the way what is your name my name is bonnie thats a cute name my name is rose that’s so pretty i got that  name  because when i was born and after i got out of the hospital a rose landed on my head wow that’s so interesting thing lets go okay .

 Both walk  into a shopping mall  and go to the arcade. Come let’s take some photos. Who is paying for this? Me  it’s fine it is two dollars  I will cover it. Look they have some filters  which one do you  you want to put one this one first then this one oh that’s so cute  you pick so many cute ones thanks  come let’s go to north beach why i want to get something there wow they have so many crocs  i like the glitter crocs there so cute  right they are so cute you can  get those pair of crocs actually i never had a pair of crocs for thank you so much your welcome  get them your size do you want giblets   yes please i want to get a pair of crocs to what colour are you going to get mint green that’s pretty lets go to the checkout let’s go to h mart  now okay but i have to be at my house on time we will your lucky i trust you let’s go  .

 So which  pelling gummies do  you want how many  many cause all of them look really yum get two of each okay  .Goes back to  to roses house wow your house is so big enters hello madam whos this this is my friend  bonnie  may i have your bags sorry im restocking today so i have to bring it into my room okay madam rose come walks up the stairs  into the room wow you have such a big room come i will show you more  of my room wow a private bathroom come you have so many clothes your  closet is so big. Could you leave the gummies on my desk. Okay,  do you want to go home now? Yes, okay, let’s use the bus. Bye,  see you at school tomorrow by the end . 

 

 

 

 

 

About Me | Ko Wai Ahau

Hi my name is Myu San and i am a year six student at Pt England School . My teacher is Miss Parrant and my favourite subject is maths because I think it is a fun subject people should know . I also enjoy building legos and going walks to the park. Please check out my learning and leave a positive comment on my blog.

Year 5 and 6 Camp Recount

Task description: A few weeks ago we had year 5 and 6 camp on our school field. This week for writing we had to create a recount about our camp experience. Check out my camp experience below:

Two weeks ago we had year five and six camp. We stayed at school for 3 days and two nights. We had it on our school field because where would we sleep in the classrooms? 

Our first activity was cooking. We were making scones. They were crumbly and powdery from the flour when we made them. After cooking we had morning tea under the marquee. 

After that we quietly walked to the hall. My team leader told us the rules about the hall. Then I jumped on the trampoline and body slammed onto the mats. I also went on a scooter and played table tennis. 

Finally we had Killer Zone. For Killer Zone we had to verse Tui, we were team Canada and the other team was USA. We had to do teamwork and the first thing we did was make the board go across the river. It was kind of frustrating because some people touched the river and we got penalty points. 

The last thing we did on day one was watch a movie. We watched Over the Moon in room 9 and 10. I did not like this movie because it was kind of old and I have watched it many times. I did try and zip my mouth so that I didn’t spoil it for anyone else. 

On day two the first thing we did was go kayaking. We had to get dressed with our togs underneath our clothes and it was really wet and cold. I had rice bubbles for breakfast because I don’t like wheat-bix even though I tried it before and said I liked it. 

Next we played a game called cyclo-ball and I did not want to play it because the seats were too tall. I can only ride if the seat is short. 

Then we went to the slip and slide and I only went one time because the grass was kind of muddy. I also didn’t like it because it was boring. So I went to get changed and Miss Parrant said I could take photos. Nu Nu and Zohidah went to get changed into warm clothes too. 

Finally we had a camp concert and we could do one more practice for our dance before it started. We went to the marquee and then we went to the hall and sat down in my line. When it started it went all quiet. The first team to dance was Piwakawaka. The group that won the dance competition was Weka. 

I had so much fun at camp and I can’t wait to go to camp next year.

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