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Writing Task about Empathy

 

 

 

task description this week in literacy we learned about empathy  and we had to write a story showing empathy and here is my writing  I really had fun doing this task this week and also we had group talks about showing empathy towards each other  and here is some things  we were talking about . How we could give them a hug  buy them a gift or  take them to a  library  and read some books while relaxing . Leave a positive comment on my blog thank you .

Begin writing here: A girl  was angry because she got a 55 on the  test.  Are okay you got a 55  im sure you can do  better next time  i got a 44 you did evan better than me .so i want to get you a gift  are you free after school we can because we can go for a walk after school bell rings you walk  home right    come just a short one walk by the way what is your name my name is bonnie thats a cute name my name is rose that’s so pretty i got that  name  because when i was born and after i got out of the hospital a rose landed on my head wow that’s so interesting thing lets go okay .

 Both walk  into a shopping mall  and go to the arcade. Come let’s take some photos. Who is paying for this? Me  it’s fine it is two dollars  I will cover it. Look they have some filters  which one do you  you want to put one this one first then this one oh that’s so cute  you pick so many cute ones thanks  come let’s go to north beach why i want to get something there wow they have so many crocs  i like the glitter crocs there so cute  right they are so cute you can  get those pair of crocs actually i never had a pair of crocs for thank you so much your welcome  get them your size do you want giblets   yes please i want to get a pair of crocs to what colour are you going to get mint green that’s pretty lets go to the checkout let’s go to h mart  now okay but i have to be at my house on time we will your lucky i trust you let’s go  .

 So which  pelling gummies do  you want how many  many cause all of them look really yum get two of each okay  .Goes back to  to roses house wow your house is so big enters hello madam whos this this is my friend  bonnie  may i have your bags sorry im restocking today so i have to bring it into my room okay madam rose come walks up the stairs  into the room wow you have such a big room come i will show you more  of my room wow a private bathroom come you have so many clothes your  closet is so big. Could you leave the gummies on my desk. Okay,  do you want to go home now? Yes, okay, let’s use the bus. Bye,  see you at school tomorrow by the end . 

 

 

 

 

 

Response to text

1. Where is Camp Kowhai located?
a) In the city centre
b) Near a beach
c) In a forest with rimu trees and a stream
d) On a mountaintop

2. What is Thea’s main challenge at the beginning of the story?
a) Keeping up with her classmates physically
b) Overcoming her fear of heights
c) Making new friends
d) Missing her family

3. How does Thea overcome her shyness?
a) By conquering her fear of heights
b) By participating in the camp activities
c) By singing around the campfire
d) By helping Mr. Hoaka

4. What event helps Thea step outside her comfort zone?
a) Building the waka
b) Finding the lost kiwi chick
c) Participating in the obstacle course
d) Listening to Mr. Hoaka’s stories

5. What is the main theme of the story?
a) The importance of following directions
b) The beauty and importance of nature
c) Overcoming shyness and making new friends
d) The value of listening to stories

6. How do you think Thea feels at the end of the story?
→ I believe that tea felt happy now because she made some new friends.

7. Can you relate to Thea’s experience in any way?
→ because my brothers and sisters went to this camp And they sometimes felt like this .
8. Why do you think camp experiences are valuable for young people?
→ to come out of theirt comfort zone and start growing up.

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